Wednesday 19 May 2010

The New World - Part 1

"C'mon son, let's go fish some mack'rel,"

Old Man Jimmy talked to Young Boy Jimmy whilst they put fishing rods in the placid water.

"Wait a second, we don't have time for this!"

Old Man Jimmy turned around to the spot of the sky where the voice seemed to come from.

"What?" he croaked "Who are you?"

"I'm Lord Zaros," said the voice "And we don't have time for fishing in this story. We need to sort out the new world, discover what happened to Black Row, and so many other plot points that will need at least two more stories to cover!"

"Black Row? New World? What are you on about?" squeaked Young Jimmy

"Do you not remember what is happening?" said Zaros "Do you not know about the company Eden?"

"Look, none of us remember any of this," said Old Jimmy "They may as well have... not existed."

"Not existed. Oh no.... My story has fallen through one of the cracks in time."

Dun.

Dun.

DUN!

2 comments:

  1. I've just had a good idea from reading this...Thanks Mark!!! :)

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  2. I can't even remember commenting that

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